Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Blog 14: Draft of ENG 103 Research Paper

Yumarlin Rodriguez
Professor Luke Vasileou
ENG103
23 November 2010
“A Tree Grows in Brooklyn, A Mirror Image of New York in the 1900’s”
Betty Smith's A Tree Grows in Brooklyn follows the life of 11 year old  Francie Nolan,  a young girl aspiring to become more than the life she's been born into as she grows up in poverty stricken Brooklyn, New York. Francie's story tells us about the simplicity of living and dying, of surviving, and of her family. Although Betty Smith's film and novel A Tree Grows in Brooklyn revolve around Francie Nolan and the Nolan family's struggles, little do we know that Francie's tale portrays the realistic life of the early twentieth-century itself and the intricacies of living in Brooklyn. It is about childhood, about growing up, about suffering and managing and sticking together during the entire time period; ranging from the broader subjects of War World 1, immigration, and politics to a family's meals and their struggles with work. All in all, it is a commentary on life in the early 1900s.
            Being poor meant that the characters in A Tree Grows in Brooklyn were constantly thinking of being poor; how they would buy their next loaf of bread, or how one's status and place of living looked like compared to another. Smith not only implies that poverty affected material things like the absence of food, heat, or comfort, but also how poverty resulted in psychological and figurative aspects of the characters in her story. Poverty ultimately results in the death and worthlessness of Francie's father, causes her Uncle Flittman to run away, and meant that Francie could not attend high school and instead had to obtain a job in order to work and support her family. Every activity, game, or action in Francie's family and life were planned around a limited source of income or resources (The small jar filled with pennies Francie's mother keeps for emergencies or how the family would store even the smallest portions of food) (Elia). In addition to the Nolan's life, Smith presents an entirely poor community, and shows the close connection between poverty and exploitation in the neighborhood; store proprietors taking advantage of children's innocence to lure money out of them (overpricing candy that is either stale or no longer edible and selling it to naive children) and piano teachers begging for tea from their students (Elia). Smith's sympathetic treatment of her characters show that poverty itself at the time was the true evil, not the people; and that people were just putting their own families and children first at any expense.
            Although Betty Smith's story is fiction based, it is not to be said that A Tree Grows in Brooklyn cannot be told from a realist point of view. Nearly every scene, actor, and set in the film represents or addresses the problem of poverty in early twentieth-century New York. While the story is set at the turn of the century (1902-1919) and contains many historical elements that may feel out of the ordinary to the modern reader, the message that is subtly portrayed in the story is one that we can all identify; poverty resulting from post war immigration. After the depression of the 1890s immigrants hoping to escape religious, racial, and political persecution or seeking relief from lack of economic opportunity or famine were driven to the United States. Immigration jumped from a low percentage of 3.5 million to a high standard of 9 million in the first decade of the new century (source). The newcomers who arrived came with promises of work, and even though most lacked the ability to communicate in the English language they were able to find solace in the ethnic neighborhoods populated by the fellow countrymen who had arrived previously (Today known as places like: Little Italy, China Town, The Lower East Side, etc). Here they could converse in their native languages, practice their religion, and take part in cultural celebrations that helped ease the hardships of leaving their homelands. Although the United States was perceived as a land of prosperity to the incoming foreigners, they were completely unaware of the social, economic, and political reality of the city at the time.
In fact, working conditions didn’t get any better with immigrants doing the low wage jobs and leaving American’s with the more prestigious jobs like many would have expected; in actuality, it did the total opposite, making life extremely difficult for those who already resided in New York.  Most industries offered hazardous conditions and very low wages, and because of the desperate need of a job, immigrants were willing to settle for any opportunity that was thrown at them—this further lowered the standards of job occupations for the less educated and poor Americans so that they were incapable of ever branching out from their poverty drought lives. Urban housing was also overcrowded and unsanitary because of the surplus of people, and many died from causes of illness and bacteria. An old Italian saying summed up the disillusionment felt by many: "I came to America because I heard the streets were paved with gold. When I got here, found out three things: First, the streets weren't paved with gold; second, they weren't paved at all: and third, I was expected to pave them." (source) In spite of the difficulties, few gave up and returned home. These migrant increases in employment had a drastic surplus in the 1990’s and are predicted to continue increasing over the years in the table below:
           
Aside from the fact that immigration levels were increasing, the chances of getting a good education were only growing slimmer. During the 1900s, most American children attended schools for no more than a few years, and from their limited education they and their parents were often content if they acquired only the basic math and reading skills; what was sufficient enough to earn an average job. It wasn’t often that parents would bother enrolling their children into schools at all with such little possibility of having them attend: 27% of children were enrolled in school and 73% weren’t enrolled (source). During this time public education suffered from the fact that more than two-thirds of the nation's schools were overpopulated, and if not overpopulated were prejudice of those with low income. No education meant no good paying job in the 1900’s, and with the price of a simple pleasure as small as what would be considered today’s five cent candy bar costing nine cents back in those days when every cent was worth dying for (source).
It is no wonder that the fictional character Francie Nolan spends the vast majority of the film being beaten down and depressed by her unfortunate circumstances. From a young age Francie spends her years struggling with poverty, and because of the pressure of not being able to support his family from unavailability of jobs due to the surplus of immigrants who occupy them, her father, Johnny Nolan results to alcohol and ultimately dies of alcohol abuse. Her mother and grandmother stress the fact that education is the only way to beat poverty and make Francie and her brother Neeley read a page from Shakesphere and from the Bible every night. With thoughts of progressing through education, Francie’s parents then send her to school, where she is the object of ridicule and is treated badly because she is poor. She has her Dad lie and tells the principal that she was moving in order to get her into a better school which isn’t as judgmental as her last. Here she strives for good grades and becomes the class’s best writer, but just when Francie feels at home, things have a turn for the worst; A few months before Neeley and Francie's graduation their father dies. Francie is heartbroken and her writing begins to reflect her depression. Her teacher speaks to her about it, but Francie decides not to complete the English work for the remainder of the year, barely passing and disappointing her mother. the class and her mother decided to attend her brother's graduation instead of Francie's.
            Now Francie's little sister Laurie is born and her mother Katie tells the children they cannot afford to keep both Francie and Neeley in school. Katie decides that Neeley must go back to school because he would not go unless forced. Katie tells Francie that she is sure Francie will find a way to go back so she will go to work.
      Francie struggles to find a way to provide for her family and make her dreams of an education come true."
Works Cited
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Saturday, November 13, 2010

Blog 13: Minority Report Response

The argument "does everything happen for a reason?" is a universal one; ranging from physchological, theological, and biblical concepts. The same argument is soon followed after with the underlying question: "If the future really is predetermined, where would a human's free will take part in it?" The belief in fate is especially tested in the movie Minority Report, where the futuristic police force "Precrime" seek out to execute and eliminate murder before it's even committed.
Although the world of Minority Report is a world where an individuals actions are foretold before they even take place, where does that leave room for choice or circumstance? I believe that the future is capable of being altered by these two factors, unlike Lemar Burgess, the creator of the PreCrime system, who believed that using the Precogs (beings  that could see into the future) was the best solution to end crime even though it wasn't foolproof. For instance, (using an example from the movie itself), at the beginning of the film, when a ball is about to roll off the desk and main character John Anderton (Tom Cruise) stops it before it hits the floor. Anderton's precise actions to stop the ball from hitting the floor causes character Danny Witwer (Colin Farrell) to question him. Witwer asks Anderton how he was so sure that the ball was going to hit the floor, which Anderton quickly answers saying that the ball's future was predetermined and he was only trying to prevent it from falling.
Even though Anderton was probably right about the ball having fallen to the floor because it doesn't have the ability to make a decision or change its course; but for argument's sake, what if the ball had rolled to a stop at the edge of the desk? Or something had cushioned it's fall? That's exactly what I mean to explain in my position for applying ethical considerations in actions to reduce dangerous crime. The ball rolling off the desk situation is similar to the law enforcement in the movie Minority Report. In the movie , criminals are "haloed" (almost equivalent to a what we would call a prison in the present day) before they commit a crime without a trail. However, the audience goes unaware of the hole that has been overlooked in the Precrime system. As the movie progresses, the audience then comes to the realization that the Precogs predictions aren't one hundred percent accurate, and that a number of the people who have been imprisoned had a minority report (a report of that person's alternate future if they chose not to go through with a crime) which were contained in the most powerful precog, Agetha. This means that some of the criminals who were imprisoned before they could even make their decisions might have changed their minds and not have gone through with the crime at all.
Despite Lemar's intentions of having a world with no murder, I believe that the Precrime system doesn't make a just and moral society.  A society that isn't fair to it's members is a corrupt one, and if I were to put myself in the position of a criminal who had a change of heart at the last minute, I'd probably go my entire life living through a punishment that I didn't deserve. Although Precrime's prominent success was preventing murderous crimes and putting criminals away before the actions were committed, the fact that the criminals didn't even get to make the choice of even committing it was also it's greatest downfall.  

Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Special Project: MOMI activity

During your visit to the Museum of the Moving Image, you must have realized that both the layout of the museum and the course of the guides' tour create a narrative. Discuss what you understood that narrative to be and what your reaction (positive, negative, skeptical) is to this narrative.

What I understood from our visit to the Museum of the Moving Image in regards to the layout and the tour was that it was trying to tell us the story of the moving image. I first noticed this because our tour (the group I was with at least), started with the phenakistoscope, which was one of the first inventions used in the creation of movies and film. We quickly followed through with other later inventions like the penny arcade, the radio, and the television. I thought this was very interesting because the tour drew you in and made you want to know what the earlier inventions had evolved into. It was especially enjoyable when we got to see how some more recent films (Freddy Krueger, The exorcist, etc.), were built using older techniques that seemed almost completely irrelevant until they were applied. It was a really great experience, and I hope to visit again one day! =)

Monday, November 8, 2010

Blog 12: Outline of Major Research Essay

A Tree Grows in Brooklyn

Thesis: A Tree Grows in Brooklyn; seeking to portray realistic issues in the 1920's. 

Topic sentences:

1. Cost of living in the 1920's.
-http://www.1920-30.com/

2.Prohibition begins in US
-http://www.buzzle.com/articles/prohibition-in-the-1920s.html
-A Tree Grows in Brooklyn; Betty Smith
3. Immigration in the 1920's.
-http://www.eyewitnesstohistory.com/snpim1.htm

Monday, November 1, 2010

Blog 9: Essay 2 (revised)

     It is all too common for people when asked about who they idolize as a hero to receive the familiar answers of “my parents”. A person’s parents might truly be a role model… but what happens when that person disappears? You and your family might remember them as a hero, but what happens once you and your family disappear; and the family after that? The memory of your heroic parents will soon have disappeared along with all of the other “heroes” we have as parents. The concept of this reality and how people choose to see what they want to see instead of accepting the truth is shown in several parts of the movie “Hero”, where not just people, but the media also, choose to ignore the truth, even if it is evident and overwhelming, and prefer to idolize an image they want, instead of a truth that doesn’t fit their preferences.
     The idea the movie portrays is not so much the fact of the modest action of saving people from a burning plane, but in fact what we want that person to represent. I mean, it’s no one’s fantasy to be saved from a burning plane by an unattractive short guy who’s too busy cussing and wondering about the contents of your wallet to care if you’re alright. What anyone would want is an honest (for the most part), giving, tall and handsome gentleman to come and save you instead. That’s exactly what John Bubber was. A most especially good example of this can be seen in the bar scene, where Bernie sits down with his close friend the bar tender and asks him the same troubling question of “What would you say if I told you I was the real hero who saved all of those people from the burning plane?” Where the bar tender simply answers him saying, “You and me, we just aren’t those type of guys. John Bubber has all of those heroic qualities that we ordinary guys just don’t have. [Adapted] “, not knowing that the real savior of all those people on the burning plane is sitting in front of him all along .Although John Bubber was living in his car, he was a generous and caring individual, and that’s exactly what the people were looking for and represented what everyone wanted to be. A homeless man with nothing, turned into a celebrity and savior. Unlike Bernard Leplante, who always seemed to have just about enough from swiping credit cards and scamming people.
     We can see the way people disregard the truth further still when the news reporter and John Bubber are creating a reenactment of the tragedy for a news broadcast. Even though John Bubber is completely oblivious of the tactics Bernie used to save the people and is using all of the wrong motives, the news reporter chooses to disregard his mistakes by saying that she was probably just “too delusional” from the crash and fire to remember that he was much taller and his actions were different than before. Further still when the news reporter visits Bernie Leplante’s apartment and finds her missing award and purse, and her and her news team automatically assume and make up this story of Bernie somehow making up a scheme of blackmailing John Bubber, even with the overwhelming evidence of who the real hero is right under their noses.
     With all of the evidence of people choosing not to accept the truth, Bernie finally comes to the realization that even if he had confessed about saving all of those people, he probably wouldn’t receive the same recognition. He didn’t have any of the admirable qualities (handsome, brave, inspiring, etc.) society look for in a hero that John Bubber possessed.
     It is no question that a hero really is what the people make of him or her. Unfortunately, a hero isn’t the person who commits the heroic action itself. Instead it is that person who possesses the qualities and ability to represent want everyone else wants.

Blog 11: Media paper

Yumarlin Rodriguez
Drs. Lucca/Vasileiou
29 October 2010
                              “Facebook, Changing the World of Social Networking”
     It only took a 19 year old expelled from Harvard to change the world of Social Networking. But, what makes Mark Zucherberg’s creation of Facebook any different than any other online social network? Aren’t Myspace and Friendster just about the same thing? Although all similar in the aspect of socializing, exchanging media files, and meeting people virtually, Facebook has managed to take the entire social experience of college and everyday life and put it online, changing mass media and communication for the entire world.
     Although Facebook has a misleading upbringing (created in the dorm room of a drunken teenager), we can’t exactly be fooled by its unappealing origin. The basis of the network came from Zucherberg’s first experiment called “FaceMash” (Kaplan). The website was designed for the humor of his classmates and his own, where students were able to rate other undergraduate students by appearance. Of course, this was malpractice on Zucherberg’s part, where he was charged with breaching his school’s computer system to attain the files required for the website, causing emotional stress to the classmates who were put on the site, and immediate expulsion (Kaplan). It was not so much the sole popularity of the site that Zucherberg found enticing (22,000 hits in just 2 hours (Mezrich), but the fact that its popularity had grown in such little time because the people on the site were people that all knew one another personally. People had the ability to contact their actual real-life friends over the internet (Mezrich).
     The Facebook’s (its former name before being changed to “Facebook”) most outstanding feature compared to the other social networking sites is its functionality and user base. Unlike other social networks, Facebook profiles are hidden unless you are logged into the site, are friends with the person, or edit your privacy settings; as opposed to Myspace where profiles are open to the public unless settings are altered (O’Hear). The website was created to help people share information in a safe and secure manner, or as Zucherberg says himself: “A lot of the challenge was just making it so that people were comfortable having a page [on the internet] at all.” (“Press Open Door 2009”).
     However, just like the world of popularity and the fashion industry, the internet world went through a lot of drastic changes and “latest fads” since 2004 and up until the present day. The use of the site became more based on what was happening at the current time and how people were able to convey it in that instant. Seeking to find a solution to the need, co-founder Chris Cox came up with an idea: “Wouldn’t it be really cool if for every single person in this graph [the social graph of the Facebook community] you could summarize what was going on for them and deliver it as a personal newspaper every day, at any moment in time, perfectly up to date, assembled by exactly the set of people that you care about?” (“Press Open Door”). That’s when Facebook launched the world’s first ever “News Feed”. The News Feed is a wall that streams everyone’s information or current “status” as soon as they post it up onto your personal homepage. This allowed Facebook users to gather information much more efficiently and rapidly, instead of having to visit a person’s individual page. The impact of the creation of the News Feed was such a huge success that other leading companies like Twitter (in terms of pace of information moving very quickly) were adapted after it.
     Facebook’s growing number isn’t solely based on a speedy stream of information, but in the types of ways users are able to use the site. The site is made for all sorts of mediums which are sorted through a “fans” and “friends” option, unlike Myspace or Friendster, where everyone is set under the same standards. This allows people to differentiate between just how deep and different these sorts of relationships are, whether it’s someone trying to convey a message to the public, or someone looking for a chat with friends from school. These connections can branch out as far as the president of the United States or just around the corner and to your grandmothers; being sure to accommodate everyone to their utmost comfort and needs, as Chris Cox states: “People want small audiences, people want large audiences. They want tight privacy control, they want to reach everyone. They want to share photos; they want to talk about the election. Or they just want to talk about what they just had for breakfast.” (“Press Open Door 2009”).
     Because of the flexibility of communication Facebook gives users, Facebook has invited companies from all over the world to be a part of their system; being the first social network to incorporate this type of media into their website. Although Myspace has similar options like these where they promote unsigned bands, Facebook just doesn’t include fan pages for music and company advertisements, but fan pages for small businesses, and nonprofit organizations like the ASPCA and The Breast Cancer Awareness Campaign (Facebook). This sort of commercialism allows companies to reach out prime targets and connect with more than 500 million potential customers. Extending flexibility and ease further still by allowing companies to synchronize their search (if wanted) to specific age groups, locations, and interests (Facebook). Doing this, Facebook is able to “build a world where people are living amongst each other even though they are far apart’” (Cox). Bringing everyday shopping, community service, and communication to your fingertips.
     Aside from being able to present an audience with clothing, goods, or an organization in the English language, Facebook has the capability of translating the website to a language of preference. Although all languages are not offered yet, (They have recently translated the website into Hebrew and Arabic) Facebook offers a variety of languages to insure fast, easy, and reliable communication. It is most probable that Facebook is not the first social network which provides a selection of languages (Myspace, Friendster, Twitter, and other social networking websites happen to obtain this ability too), but is one of the networks with the widest range of selections; making communication and exchange of media only that much faster and easier for those even outside of the United States.
     Although probably not the first in changing communication towards language, Facebook is the first social network to promote communication by starting online communities called “groups”. These types of groups are made by the people, and for the people, and are unlimited in variation and topic. One of the most popular is called “Scribd”, an online book club that lets people communicate in the interests of books. Scribd allows people to read together, share articles, form book clubs, get book recommendations from friends, and even debate and discuss new books and stories. 55,000 items are streamed over Scribd every day, including projects handed out by teachers, book publishings by authors, famous chefs exchanging recipe cards, and hobbyists who are looking for all types of manuals (Facebook). With groups created by Facebook like Scribd, friends and people from all over the world can read and share documents together, making it easier to get insight and recommendations through help of your friends; something Myspace and Friendster and other familiar sites have not been able to achieve.
     Facebook has in fact had such a strong impact on a society that they have also launched a recent application called “500 Million Stories”. The application allows users to post up collections of stories they’ve shared about the impact Facebook has had on not just their friends, but their very own lives. Through this, people are allowed to share their own stories and read thousands of others, categorized by themes and locations all around the world. Facebook has helped millions of people like: “Ben Saylor, a 17-year-old high school student, who turned to Facebook to organize a community effort to rebuild the Pioneer Playhouse, the oldest outdoor theater in Kentucky, after it was damaged by floods in May.” And “Holly Rose, a mother in Phoenix, who credits a friend’s status message telling women to check for breast cancer with her being diagnosed in time to treat the disease. She used Facebook for support during treatment and became a prevention advocate herself.” (Facebook).
     Mark Zucherberg and the creators of Facebook aren’t the only ones who sought out to change the world through communication, but other figures in history have also; One of the most popular being Marshall McLuhan. Marshall McLuhan was an educator and scholar whose work generally consisted of the study of media theory (“Regent University for Communication and the Arts”). His work is viewed by many, (including Zucherberg and the Facebook team) as one of the cornerstones of media theory; having practical applications in advertising and television industries. Employers at Facebook use McLuhan’s famous expression “The medium is the message” as a motivator to keep helping the world connect in different types of ways (“Press Open Door 2009”).
     Although Facebook’s greatest factor has brought many great changes to the internet world in regards of most anonymity being executed and helping people share more and more information, its greatest factor has also been its greatest downfall. As opposed to Myspace, Twitter, or Friendster, some Facebook users feel that Facebook gives much more information than it generally should. Unlike the sites mentioned previously, Facebook has options where users can include their employment and educational information and has also recently launched a new application called “Places” (Facebook). The application (with use of a cell phone or mobile device) is designed to let users tell their friends where they are and vice versa, making it possible to track and give away a person’s location at any moment in time. This can prove as a dangerous tool if let fall in the wrong hands, and while a percentage of the social networking world think its fun to chart their travels around town and the world, another percentage think it's a sign of online predatory appeal (Gaudin).
Analyst Dan Olds, as quoted by Journalist Sharon Gaudin says "Would you want a wide number of people to know that there's no one home at your house?" Olds asked. "And, couple that information with Facebook posts about how you put your dog in a kennel while you're on a two-week trip, that's just too much information to put out there. Many people think they're only sharing it with their friends, but they have to assume that they're sharing it with anyone who can access their friends' computers or Facebook accounts." (Gaudin). While Places can be an entertaining tool, no one should use it without considering the consequences of some location information getting out past their immediate circle of friends (Gaudin).
     Another criticism associated with applications like Pages that concerns privacy advocates is that the applications are launched to users using opted-in settings which are set up by default. This means that applications similar to these are running automatically, rather than allowing and giving users the decision to run it in the first place (Gaudin).Users can sometimes go unaware and unannounced to applications that are set up by default, causing bewilderment when something goes wrong or attention is drawn to the matter. It is also critiqued that turning off the settings that are on by default aren’t as easy as it seems, as Guadin states: “opting out isn't just a simple matter of clicking on a "no thanks" kind of button. Shutting off Facebook Places is a multistep process.”, where she then proceeds to demonstrating the steps she had to take to changing and altering the settings Facebook had by default to her own personal preference in her article.
     Unfortunately, adaptations to the internet like social networking never follow their original course. Different factors, such as the speed of information, the amount of it portrayed, or privacy control towards it, affect their outcome. Yet, just because there are slight differences between the people who use it, it doesn’t mean that Facebook cannot be appreciated for its unique qualities and the way it has changed mass media and communication.






Citations and Reference:
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Kaplan, Katharine. "Facemash Creator Survives Ad Board." Harvard Crimson (2003): n. pag. Web. 17 Oct 2010

"Marshall McLuhan." Regent Uiversity, School of Communication and the Arts. Regent Univrsity, n.d. Web. 29 Oct 2010. .

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